Hey your works are amazing. I have read Mafia's Angel aroundd 10 times. Everytime i finish reading it i go back reading again. Good luck to u for yr future works.
Well, a new world has been opened to us, while the author has shown us the imagination with the new concept of the world, writing can be improved further, way to go author.
This is the first time I'm leaving a review without being asked to. I really like this novel. Not only is it particularly hard to find grammatical errors but the writing is so smooth that you would have to force yourself not to enjoy it. Its really easy to see yourself in the midst of the characters and thats hard to come by.The story is a hook. I haven't read much cuz I'm busy writing a novel of my own but Lord this is Spirit stone worthy I wouldn't mind at all if this went premium. If you like stories where the mc is legit the bad guy? Stories like that of the Joker or something, then I think you'd like this. Hey Author, keep it up, I may not comment often cuz I'm hurrying to the next chapter but you've got a loyal reader right here!
Sorry, could not read past the first few paragraphs. I started against better judgment seeing that every word in the synopsis started with a capital letter. That was not the case in the first chapter luckily, but upper and lower case are not used according to standard English. The formatting generally should be revised. The punctuation separates connected elements into different sentences. Dialogue is written inside the running text without markers when it starts or stops. Etc. I realise this might be due to translation from a language where punctuation and other formatting rules are different. But it takes a lot of energy to figure out the text when it doesn't follow common writing rules at all, and the risk that the reader abandons it instead is big, which is a pity as the story itself might be good (I marked the other categories as "3" as I could not judge them.)
leo woke up to see his mother sleeping beside him when he looked at her he felt something that he thought he would never feel a sense of security and peace since in his last life he was a orphan he never knew his parents as long as he can remember.
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