*This just my initial review*okay Mr. Author..the concept of your story is.. good, i cant say great but.. average and for me its good..but your style of writting is not good for short-med chapter.conversations is broken by explanations, Info dump here and there. should make AUX chapter rather than dump on chapters because it feel cheap for pay-to-read.example of conversations..MC: "Hello there"*Explanations of something useless or irrelevant*Girl: "hey, how're you"*inner monologoue with 2-4 paragraph of explanations*that is not good style of writting for short-med chapter my bro..if you want that style, you have to be use 10-15K words, and cant be less..this is just my opinions.because this annoying for me, that Also this is PAY-TO-READ. this is not worth kinda feeling i have. maybe just for me, but maybe there is some readers feel the same.i dont know, thanks.
I hope you can include Awakening story..reincarnation in another body million of time..have a lot of knowledge and friends around the world..it is among best story i've ever read and were my first novel..thank you..i will support you guys and keep cheering for you..all the best ok..
A great book probably not going to be selected though. I would really appreciate it if someone can send me link to the MTL or raws. Thank you and God bless.
feels like ive been scammed seriously. first 40 chapters are well written then from now on its a mtl badly translated novel, feels bad using batch unlock and discovering this after
Straight into my library. The novel is very good.World building : Although not much world background is shown, two prologue chapters, the origin of the system, and a little bit of information about Gaia, are sufficient to demonstrate that the author has sufficient background to write the story.Cain (MC): Mc can be defined as someone who is good to those who are good to him, bad to those who are bad to him or cross his moral line, and indifferent to the remaining ones. I especially like how he doesn't differentiate between male and female enemies and gets straight to kill. He is a reincarnator with sealed memories, but that isn't the main focus. He is resolute and smart and not naive and wimpy.System: No major help. It doesn't reward him with any experience or anything. No subspace. No shop, etc. Until now, the system has served as a guide rather than a spoon feeder. It can change because various modules of the system are still locked.Side characters: There are no major side characters till now except Levi, so I can't comment.Writing quality: English is my second language, so even if the quality is bad, I wouldn't knowUpdating speed: 4 chapters/week is not enough for me. At least 1 chapter per day should be the goal. But that is entirely up to the author. Overall, a good novel with a great potentials. Kudos to the author.
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