Should Have Been Us

Only shooting stars break the mold

I cannot simply stand by and feel his pain. I cannot stand and watch him die. I know there is only one way to preserve his life, save it even.

So far so good, in comparison to the previous story I can see some clear improvement, I also like how the author is always quick to update his stories. The writing quality is great but can be improved. Overall very solid novel so far, I’m really invested. I hope the author keeps up the hard work they are putting in.

Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars.I would love any feedback you guys can give. This is my third original novel, with the first one still ongoing. Feel free to also treat this as a Q/A session.

I like this novel. It has unique things others dont touch upon.

Keep up, love the update stability, is unique.