Shadows by the Sea

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5 ⭐spamming..... but I am sure it won't be selected......sigh*.then I will be in fahrenheit I am not against the spirit of fair play that all the best to you too much complex and near me know if you are free to contact me at the end of the day of my android phone on T-Mobile USA and Canada and Australia and Europe and America or maybe japan girl in the world did you expect to receive e-mails like this is the issue of translation and definition of this cuteness overload protection of human life force.....

I got bored after the first 100 chapters or so. It was a good introduction to the story but it just got bogged in details.

The idea is good and the way it’s going seems quite fun so far..But the translation is barely adequate. There’s a lot mistakes That clearly indicate at least partial mtl so reading it can be a bit cumbersome. I hope this improves but that seems unlikely..

dont mind the high rating, its mid. DO NOT READ. YOU WILL BE SCARRED. good writing tho, concept cool too. The fact that they incorporate the Egyptian gods, when most time it is greek mythos being used is a breathe of fresh air

Sounded interesting in the summary, though, after reading a few chapters i cant get interested enough in the MC to continue, but the biggest probem for me is the world building, even if the story is 2000 years in the future humanity stagnated in the 20th century, no matter how much you want to play victim and blame the world technology will aways bleed through all layers of society (just not a the same time) if not for the simple fact that we live in a capitalist economy (the same reason slavery ceased to exist, money trumps everything), so in summary the impression i have is that victim mentality not only shaped the MC but also the World

"Perfect idea, you need father's favour in other to gain your freedom, your other brothers are going to surpass you if you don't pleas the King."

"Mutant?"