I'm rewriting this story!

I have taken down Arc 2 and Arc 3 already to avoid spoiling my new novel. The only reason I'm keeping the first 10 chapters is nostalgia; the writing is awkward and the story is not plotted out properly, but it's here if anyone wants to compare it to the new one.

If you'd like to read a more professionally written version of this story, I highly suggest checking out my Synergy.

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"I see," Kiona said. "But . . . you're changing once again, aren't you?"

The entity considered her question, lifting a clawed hand towards the night sky. They observed the back of their hand idly, watching the glowing orange veins pulse alongside their pitch-black exoskeleton. The wind picked up right then, and Kiona shivered—just as much from the cold as from the savage grin on the creature's face.

"That's right," the entity said, clenching their hand slowly into a fist. They let out a quiet laugh, staring defiantly at the Moon as it rose from behind the clouds. "We are shades, yet not exactly. Not like the others. Here, in this world, we've become something more. We are the Shades of the Moon."

There was a heartbeat of silence, during which Kiona joined the entity in their skygazing. The light-green Moon loomed over the city, shining like the entity's eyes. It promised otherworldly knowledge and terrible secrets. It promised progress. It promised change. In that moment, Kiona couldn't have imagined anything more beautiful.

"Shades of the Moon, huh?" she said, smiling a bit. It had a nice ring to it.

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  1. LOVEcats321
    LOVEcats321 rated it
    Book is great. it's helpful to read the books before it to really understand though could also be used as a stand alone. Each child has an arc which is amazing!! The flow is great. I am chomping at the bit for the next book. I need to know what happens next!!♡♡♡♡♡
  1. SonicVinilf
    SonicVinilf rated it
    Thank you for reading! It may take me a second or five to find them and respond, but I LOVE reading your thoughts and comments!

    Much love - Eden
  1. VA29
    VA29 rated it
    Raziel quickly activated the Light power of his, trying his best to tend his brother's wound.

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