Self-Improving Hermit

The story is great but the constant badmouthing against religions makes this book unreadable@author: please try being more respectful and open-minded

to start this off properly I have to preface this with I haven't read this book yet I just wanted to say something to the author. you said roughly that the mc will start off weak and not to expect him to power level, i'm fine with that as long as his abilities are either interesting and or well explored.a example of this is the dao of magic it takes a already interesting and IMO ability/power cultivation and explores it rather thoroughly.the reason this is relavent is because "to me at least" this is one of the major draws to a op fan fiction almost instant access to cool abilities/powers to explore.this acts as a really good hook to get people to stay and continue reading especially on fan fic sites, because you most probably won't find people who care about the story or character development as long as the mc doesn't make them want to throw up in repulsion.ps sorry if this comes out as a big block of text I wrote this on my phone I tried to make it not one but I can only hope it worked.

don't bother reading unless you don't mind MTL cause after 40 it drops in quality immediately.better to not waste the money or the fp on it

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Its A Book so that you can increase your points

"Shit, what happened there, go there!"

Just as the horned rabbit's horn was about to reach my chest, I threw up a simple guard with my left hands as brought down the sword in my right.