Love the novel itβs a different and I love the army building. The update is nice for a new novel. Keep up the good work!!!πππ Donβt drop!!!πππππ
It was better than most of these multiplier novels up until actual battles started happening. Author has this weird idea that adding comedy to a scene where people are being burned to death somehow makes good story. MC is also completely r'tarded, this being part of the brand of "comedy". 23 chapters and then it went from fine to dogsh't within a span of 2 chapters....
The translation quality is quite good, there was only really one mistake in the first few chapters.But the rest... the story has so many plotholes. MC gets a repair ability from a simulation, in this simulation he acquired it by being upgraded, but only to mid-tier, and when the baron 'finds out' about that ability it's suddenly an ability only known from legends and he has to actually look up what kind of rarity that ability would make the sword, but the guy who buys the sword, some guy even lower in the hierarchy of that world somehow instantly knows about it as that is 'from legends'. Another example: MC simulates his life and still had like 5years(or some such,not sure how long exactly, but definitely more than a year) to live, but a minute after the simulation the guy who uses MC is attacked and MC needs to use an ability he only acquired in the simulation to save the guy wielding him, like what? why could he survive in the simulation but not in RL even though nothing effectively changed? Not gonna bother writing down more. If you don't mind plotholes and a somewhat bland plot you can read it, but if you want to read something actually good, then this is nothing for you.
I like it and hope it gets picked... I dont really no what else to say. The mc is a rich kid that's not brain dead like most mc's in this genre, the story progression seems to be good (it's only 40 chapters so there's not much to say tbh) and the power he gets seems interesting.Overall a pretty fun read and hopefully it will get picked, also how fo you vote for a story? I really can't seem to figure it out...
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