It seems like a good story but the writing is absolutely horrendous in my opinion. Its worse than even MTL in my opinion. I had to reread sentences 5 times because I couldn’t understand what it was supposed to say. It could’ve been a very good story, but the writing made me lose 2 brain cells.
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I just finished reading the first 10 chapters. All I can say is that the story is way too good, the plot is also interesting. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope you keep on updating as much as you can. The only thing that's lacking is a strong grammatical base, I feel your writing needs to be a bit polished.In general, it's a pleasant story. Keep up challenging yourself to do more.
Because the summary has been singularly unhelpful, the MC's cheat is this. Basically, he can learn martial arts very quickly, at the cost of destroying the martial arts books he's learning from. For example, he opened eight acupoints in two days, destroying two books in the process.
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