Second Chance Alpha

great book .i believe this is one of the first books that ive wanted to completely read to the end

awwwwww so good book.

Well written, fast moving. Good

OMG I love this book and ready to read the next one❤

I've read up to chapter 100 and tbh it's an average novel that has potential but due to its bad writing, it fails to realize its full potential.

100 chapters and you can find a couple of plotholes (important ones) and the novel skips a lot of content expecting you to know what's happening behind the scenes.

For me, the biggest plothole is her medical skill, we know the MC comes from the 21st century and is a genius when it comes to medicine but somehow she's able to concoct magical medicines with magical herbs like if she had studied their effects somewhere. The same goes for other stuff that can be used for medical purposes. She's totally ignorant about the cultivation world and its fantasy elements until it isn't convenient for her.

As I said, it has potential, I love how the protagonist uses martial arts and how it's described but those plotholes and content skipped really hurts the novel.

The end was kinda anticlimactic, rushed and overall just disappointing

The greatest synopsis ever written, above all beneath none

It's so trash I read 478 chapters 🗿

Please continue the book

This novel's summary is too funny ಡ⁠ ͜⁠ ⁠ʖ⁠ ⁠ಡ

Yup! That's sort of the idea I'm going with.
I got tired of reading these "Super advanced AI's that are indistinguishable from humans" in VR novels that basically just boil down to Skyrim NPCs after the first interaction, so I wrote NPCs that actually have personalities.

Why do people bully Elyon lol, im reading RSS as my first Elyon novel and its pretty good so far (700+ in rn) Im just so new to the LN scene and seeing every third comment bully bro got me confused lol