Screen Partner

Really good story, a little disappointed i cant read volume 5 righit now but i think the rewrite will be worth the wait. honestly one of the best things on here, the author knows how to write a cultivation novel. please just trust me, for your own good.

A refreshing read for a while...Writing Quality. The flow of each scenes were neatly describes. Also, just to give a piece of advice. The other authors used to tell me this as well xd. I have seen parts of the story that has longer paragraphs, I suggest you to cut it more into minimal paragraphs since it might look too long and ardous to read for some of your readers especially those reading in mobiles.Story Development. The story flowed smoothly and it show great potential with its unique plot.Character Design. The Ml were portrayed as a pushover on the first parts of the novel but as you went on to read, you could see his hidden charms as well. The other characters also supports well the flow of the story.Updating Stability: Hmm...just take your time to hone your chapters.Quality > Quantity.World Background. Well-detailed.Overall, this book shows a lot of potential already. Keep up the good work, author.

Vanitas here, thought i would help u a little

definitely a five star rating from me. i recommend this book to readers as i will keep an eye out for it

Been really enjoying this im looking forward for more chapters. I think the world is really interesting and has lots of potential so I hope we get to see more of it in future chapters

I like this story, hopefully in next morning or week chapter 3 will be publish as soon as possible, i am excited to see the sequel of the chapter