Five star review for this fan fiction!!! Great concept, and I truly had open my eyes toward this META essense stuff... Hope author can introduce me more fan fiction that involve META essense... Seems like a good material for story...
You must read this book! You absolutely must read this book! Why?Here, I will give you the details!This book has an interesting concept, both in terms of writing style and story development. You definitely won't be bored while reading this book and want more chapters.Keep it up Ark!
I really like your novel so far looking forward to future chapters!!! I was wondering though if there will be romance? I would love if you could reply. Thank you😘
The only way that she could check them was to read the numbers at the right bottom corner one-by-one. The numbers were tiny and her eyes ached by reading them.
What the actual frick was the ending? THE most rushed ending I have ever read. it's basically about 4/5's of the way through the story arc and it just wraps its self up in about 5 chapters. It's like the author had 15 minutes to live and wanted his book done before he died. Other than the story being garbage the characters are painfully mediocre and become cardboard cutouts about halfway through. The world building is a huge missed opportunity as to begin with it has a great premise but utterly fails to be unique or interesting and falls into the trap of generic "lower level world -> higher level world -> even higher level world".The translation quality is pretty great for this website, which while not saying very much, is nice. With the book being complete the stability of updates is automatically perfect.Translation quality: 8/10Stability of Updates: 10/10Story Development: 1/10Character Design: 2/10World Background: 3/10Overall: 4.8/10 (Dragged up heavily by Stability of Updates and Translation Quality)I wouldn't recommend. What a shame.
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