The Grammar is so terrible. I was genuinely interested but just couldn't continue after chapter 2 so if the Grammar is not corrected, a story with such good potential will be hard to read
For anyone wondering, I think the novel has the potential to be fantastic. However, the author desparately needs to hire an editor. You can understand what is happening and what the author is describing, but the verbiage and sentence structure is really, really bad.
Eey author! Stop using fake accounts to boost your popularity and stones to wpc top 1. Its been 7 hrs and you got 61 stones? Stop try faking it! Play fair and square!! If you delete this review, I will post again here and to the forum seeking help. You are denying the effort of various other authors out there . So man up!!!!
I'm not good at making a review or opinion. This story is absolutely wonderful and nostalgia. Keep it up, Author!!! I recommended this again. Don't ever hesitate to read this. That's all :)
Firstly, the concept of the novel seems intriguing and full of potential. The idea of exploring a world where humans have evolved due to a catastrophic event and the juxtaposition of advanced technology and human greed is a captivating premise that could attract readers.Secondly, the main character's journey of self-discovery and redemption through his second chance at life could make for a compelling story. The mystery surrounding his return and the world he finds himself in creates an engaging plot that could keep readers hooked.Finally, my advice would be to focus on creating well-developed characters and an immersive setting that transports readers to this futuristic world. Consider exploring themes of human nature, morality, and the consequences of our actions, which could add depth and meaning to the story.Overall, keep writing and exploring the possibilities of this unique and exciting world you have created. 👍
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