A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US
Loving the story so far. The frequent updates and lack of a pay wall are godsends! The only reason I didn’t give World building five stars is that the mc’s previous world seems kind of undefined. I can’t tell if it was a modern world with slightly supernatural martial arts, or it was a cultivation world and he was just low level. This isn’t a criticism and it’s entirely possible this will be fleshed out more soon. Regardless, this story is a gem among all the trash I normally sift through, so thanks for that! 👍🙏😀
I love the world background, the power and types, I really love, there's nothing to say on this novel if his writing is average his mind and thinking and creating world background is awesome. I also like the plot when a tamer step unto the path of tamer, they will be cursed by the world.
They walked toward the end of the corridor and saw that there was a great red door with 2 golden statues beside it. The right statue was that of a young man with a sword in its hand.
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