"You don't speak unless we tell you to." Commanded the man who hit him, he was going to assault the crying man again to get his point across. When he was stopped by a black man in a black suit as he fixed his cuff.
Mariin akong pumikit at hinalikan si Ori sa pisngi. I love this little girl so much kahit kapatid ko lang siya sa ina. She doesn't deserve to cry like this. Ako nalang ang masaktan, 'wag lang siya.
My complaints of the story would have to be, in this order, kidnapping of loved ones (for any duration of time), memory loss of loved ones, the NSFW scenes, (even as a person that is usually happy to read them just kind of annoyed me to no end and I’m not really sure why. Maybe because it doesn’t feel like there is any closeness to any of them besides Rose and so it just feels like a continuation of a one night stand instead of any romance)
Hello! Shameless author here! I was inspired to write this story when my son mentioned being afraid monsters might come. I promised him I would beat them up for him, but then I realized: I would be totally screwed if that actually happened! So I started writing 😂. I spent a long time, planning, editing, and reviewing before release, so I look forward to sharing this story with everyone! Still, your feedback is valuable, both positive and negative, so feel free to leave reviews, comments, and if you’re really liking the story, a power stone or two? No? That’s ok too 😅
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