Excellent! Awesome storyline, great characters, written well, fantastic ups and downs and held my interest from start to finish. Bravo author will be looking for more of your completed works.
Reading the few chapters this novel has right now (6), it has potential, the story is interesting as most non-human novels are for me, but there are some improvements to be done, the first thing is the grammar or sentence structure, don't get me wrong it is readable, but a few mistakes creep in here and there.And another is the wall of text, make paragraphs, it will be much more readable and easier for the eye to read it instead of the whole chapter being in one paragraph. I will stay tuned though and watch your progress in the near future. Keep it up!
I don't like the ML sooooOoo ******* ,no loyalty ,dishonest .etc... ( even thought in real life is hard to find a forever .. I want to read novel that has Forever ) 😈😈😈 😬
My 1st review got deleted anyways I decided to write another one. 1st of all the author is really racist. I admit there are other stories in which authors occasionally put down people of other countries, but this one novel you can not just ignore it as the author is super racist.Every other chapter it's a new country and its people, and the author like dehumanizing these foreign people. Like their lives are worthless, they are all scumbags because he (MC) saw handful of them doing criminal activity.If you are a reader who are from the following countries Myanmar, Vietnam, Japan, Somalia or if you are Muslim. Then I suggest skipping this story.
If you love novels like Monster Pet Evolution this is for you it's a lot better than others of this type mainly because there is not skirt chasing MC, he is not OP, his single advantage is his ability to check the Grades of Pets before making a contract with them something that others have to do first to be able to check the Stats of Pets and he thinks like a normal human(something rarely seen nowdays). The quality was good for the first 39 chapters after it becomes worst but not so much. Give it a try.
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