You can poke more holes in the plot then swiss cheese and with everything said you can always find some form of error, either what was said didn’t make sense, dumb choices, things suddenly changing the next chapter.
*******************Author's Statement********************Worth a Reading and giving this LN a shot because of what the Author said.Quoting the Author:"I understand the points you've made, and you're, right. When I first started writing this, I was no a professional(heck I arent .) but the plot at the beginning was allover the place and since there were things I couldn’t change without properly rewriting the story, I worked around them and tried to make them better and more realistic.One things I'm sure I got right from The beginning was my MCs stupidity and sometimes foolish decisions. It helped me shape him into the person he turns out to be. The harem route was a spur of the moment decision I shouldn't have made, so to solve that blunder I made them important side characters. They never lost their relevance as the story is as much about the supporting cast as the main character.Everything you've complained about, I've tried to solve down the line. And believe it wasn't easy, but I Had a lot help from my readers. They helped save my story and made me a better writer. The first three of four dozen chapters weren't really good. But I learnt to be better after, so please, I know I'm being selfish or something, but give Kael one more chance. If you get to 100 and its still bad, then you can kick it to the curb. I'm sorry the earlier chapters did not make it worth your while, but give me a chance to redeem myself, and my story. "
I'm only writing this review because it will help Vain in some way (I don't actually know what a review does in WN for a novel lol), but I am reading this in SH and it's one of my favourite novels. I recommend this for everyone that's reading this review, and while I would like to say the reasons for that, I don't really know how to write a proper review when it comes to things like Writing Quality, Story Development, Character Desing, Updating Stability and World Background. But what I can say it's that I would give 5 Stars for each of this categories, and I hope that the people who read/will read this novel have the same wonderful experience that I have when reading it's chapters!Thanks for the novel btw, Vain!
bro i liked it lot probably one of best sports novel are i ever read the thing i liked most thet mc doesn't have so called overpowered system he also has work but i also feel you are inspired by hitting zone in many scenes ok but i can't read further because i am poor 😙😙🥲😗
Interesting story. Takes a trust of reborn as monster/ transmigration to another world to a new level and makes it unique. Looking forward to this stories future. So far so good.
Listening to Xiao Lou's words, XuanRong wanted to applaud her. She was clearly trying to show how filial and virtuous XuanFei was by saying those praying in the temple and whatnot.
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