I don't know where to begin, disappointed so much potential but the Author just didn't care much I mean why give the mc so much talent if his not going to used it, almost all increased of strength is because of external help either he use pills or magical powders I won't mind if he use it one or two times but everysingle time why does he even have a heavenly spiritual root and a supreme physique for and let's not forget how dumb the mc is, I'll just stop here caused it's just a wasted potential.
This es an excellent piece of work. The characters are funny, well-developed. The OPness of the MC is not a let down as in many other novels. It is quite interesting to see MC think and work even though he has knowledge of many things.Note to author - You can try to elaborate more about on the ingredients and processes of making the equipment and pills. It will add more depth to the story. You can also add some background on the way some rare ingredient and materials are obtained. And if possible, please amke a glossary of power levels, world/realm names, raking of pills/weapons.
concept is great but no connectivity when u are walking in q road the author would suddenly talk abouthow a guy is sitting in his home or that the mc has kids or grand kids and even try to add hot shots and other things here i don't get it ! this is pure bad doesn't have much fluidity it's worse than a newbie author this website always makes my expectations lower than what it was hats off
Webnovel is committing theft by signing this novel. Don't worry I have already reported this. I would suggest everyone report it too. This is not a simple mistake.
This novel is terrible. For some reason I can't post my actual review here so I'll copy paste it below as a reply. Just know that the novel is terrible.
The mystery tag is not for show, nothing is truly explicitly explained and the reader is left to draw his/her own conclusions based on the clues given. It is the opposite of those cultivation novels where they dump a wall of info at the start. Suffice to say that the build-up is slow but steady, and the writing makes it worthwhile.Not to give too many spoilers but you have a main heroine who behaves entirely different after a suicide attempt, causing those who know her to be in awe and surprise. The heroine has limited resources, but has a sharp mind (and tongue) and to see her overturn expectations is worth reading.
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