checked the First 4 chapters and impressed. Hope you can finish editing so that I can check out the rest of the content on other chapters. Thanks for the work,
The premise that person gets into a video game is done already, many times. The unique thing about this is the world itself. It is a well written story with no dumb plot twist. The story is quite humorous while still having a sense of foreboding doom. It kinda compels one to keep on reading to satisfy the curiosity. If I had to nitpick something about the story it would be the length of chapters but author makes up for it by daily updates.I hope that the story and the author get what they deserve and it certainly deserves a place in Top 10.
Would be better if the reader didn’t Have to go tru everyday of a babies life to get some action story has massive Potential But it just doesn’t Deliver on the action very slow story development for now I’m Dropping This until it picks up
I'm continuing this on an mtl site so it's passed 2000 chaps there. There are some boring chapters and arcs here and there but I like that author doing new things and creative at that. The lore is very interesting and the fact that mc actively creates his own worldbuilding is fun too
Books that involve a combination of warfare and fantasy have won my favour. And this just happens to be one of the few. The readers are pulled into the action a little too fast and this does not enable us to get a proper feel of the world around the MC. But the other parts make up for this.
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