This one is Excellent, Great, Superb!!The Story is slightly similar to gamers of underworld but the MC is the one who play the game and direct the playthrough through the story instead of picking player from earth to be a guinea pig. I dont want to spoil the fun so you better read it yourself all I could say is this one is guud!!
Wow just wow at first i saw the title i think this **** just gonna be same with "online" novel but i wrong wow so glad that im wrong Greatly enjoy the storyNice mc (for me :v ) Plot like it The scene when she/he dont know :v is great im im reading morning 3 :v cant sleep Anyway i enjoy this thank you author Support this bruhhh Btw more please :v
Hello, this is your dear friend dropping you a five-star review to show support. I will read more closely and give a more accurate review and if you're reading this for that, please just skip this. I will say though, author writes quite well but needs to work hard on keeping up more stable updates. Please maintain stable updates. You can do it rach, I somewhatpartlyprobably believe in you!
The story is good and has potential. Also has good grammar and pacing. The mc is likable and also other characters. The storyline is starting to get interesting! Good luck!
Shameless author review here.It's my my first story. So there will be a lot of mistakes. I hope you will forgive me and and tell me where i did the mistake. It will be like a noobs writing but hope you will find the plot interesting. Here I tried something new with matching wrestling with system. I know my writing kinda sucks so you can curse at me but please do tell what i could add to make the story better.Well who am i Rambling to. I don't even have views 🙂
this is not a serious novel, just another clumsy novels who write it for fun or for some other reason, this story doesn't have much potential, the MC brain functions in a weird way, the MC got only one track of mind, that is harem harem harem which takes out all the good things in this novel, the author makes it sound like the MC is one of the greatest young master, all I can see is a wimpy pervert spoiled brat who would lick a women shoes to get her thigh, the MC brain is so dense that he cannot understand anything outside of pervert women zones.
Palabas na ako ng airport and I almost called a taxi cab ng may tumawag sa akin. Nang pagtingin ko ay si mang Elias pala, kumaway siya sa akin at ng nakita niyang nakatingin na ako sa kanya, he ran towards me.
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