Story needs editing that's for sure, but my main issue is that this story is labeled pregnant and the description makes it sound like she was pregnant with twins. But that's not the case. The twins are her twin sister's and she raises them from infancy! That's drastically different!
All of your stories are listed as ongoing, that’s a lot of different stories to write all at once. Do you ever finish any of them or are we all just wasting out time?
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