Good Novel to read but a bit short right now. Hope the release will be a bit more maybe. Overall only a 4 Star right now because it is a bit too early to be rated
Cover: 5/5, The cover edits is really amazing. One glance and I can already tell how much effort went into.Synopsis: 4/5. Although there are some info dumping in the synopsis, I was able to tell what's going on and what the story would be about.Grammar: 4/5 Grammar wise, this novel is so much better than 90% of the novels in here. There aren't any sentences in this novel that would suddenly changed it tenses midway so I'm happy about this.Writing: 4.8/5. Story wise and the writing structure is mesmerizing. I have been thoroughly impressed by author's unique way of storytelling and I can't wait to read more.Overall: 4.8/5. Would I recommend this novel to you? The answer would be yes and you should read it to prove my review right.Sincerely, The one and only Doraemon~
overall the story is very well rounded, but I feel that a couple changes could make all the difference. What I feel are those changes are 1. the fight scenes should be longer ( not more descriptive, as in more back and forth) and 2. you should add pov's to other characters ( your choice on how long)
Hey, It's the author here, shameless review, I know, in reality I probably would have about a 4-3.5 in the grammar part but I know that this story will be a page turner in the future, so I hope your ready for the journey of the two brothers.
Well thought out concept and descriptively tailored world background. The novel is interesting and intriguing with a well maintained uniqueness. Good job author!
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