Reincarnated Vampire Princess and Former Hero, Trample Over Mankind

hhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........................................................

Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.

Hm, added to the library. If this story disappointed me I will change the rating at least after reading firs hundred chapters. Wait author for my response soon.

Just a simple reviewWriting quality - 5Stability of updating - 5Story development - 5Character design - 5World background - 5This story is different from all the novels i've read.Mc is calm,lazy,smart and antagonist,different from your usual dumb mc.For now he has only one goal which is to find out about his own existence.This is a story that you guys won't regret reading.

anyone have raws..?…...................................................…...................................................…...................................................

exp..........................................................................................................................................

This book seems to have the foundations of a great book but is let down by poor writing. if you want to see what I mean I've left comments in the first chapter. another thing is the way speech is handled, having the name after every speech is disjointing. try to build the speech into the sentences. the name after style could then be used for greater effect in confusing fight scenes or when lots of aside characters are talking. Also in general work on the way you express ideas. eg aghh its my alarm is both a unnatural thing to say and disjointing. instead he jolted awake, realizing the dragon roars were in fact his alarm clock. This only an example, there's many ways to do it but this book has a lot of potential if you go back and rewrite it.

The story is amazing. The interactions between characters is well done and the personalities of each character is well developed. Furthermore, the world building is described in detail. My only problem is that the chapters aren't released often enough. I understand that the chapters are a bit longer but all I want is a chapter released every other day at least. Highly recommended story.