Writing Quality 4/5: Good word diversisty and well structured sentences, the reader won't struggle here. There are however a few minor typo's every few chapter that are probably due to autocorrect. I.E: Brian becomes brain.Story Development 4.5/5: The story focuses Mc's inventions/discoveries used for the betterment of others, be it individuals or entire communities. Something I'd like more of is POV's from different characters it's one thing to see the improvements of the Burtons via the MC another entirely from the POV of say a guard.Character Design 4/5: The MC is too OP... Well that is sort of the point but I think I'd enjoy the story more if the MC had to work together with say Ceasar to perfect the manuals for the major heavenly laws. In the end it feels as if other major characters in the story can never measure up to the MC.Updating Stability 5/5: Seems to update frequently, I just binged nearly 300 chapters so I'll just leave 5/5.World Background 4.5/5: Starts out as pretty standard xinxia fare I.E: eight kingdoms, 4 empires multiple planets. While you read the story however the book/novel takes the time to introduce dukes and the royal family from both the Mc's kingdom and foreign kingdoms.
This is the best book I've ever read. From writing quality to story development to character design and development to world background, everything down to the minute details are perfect. If I had the chance to forget reading this, I would so I could read it again and feel the same feeling I felt. Honestly, this felt like I was watching an anime series, every chapter left me wanting more and more. The world background/building is comparable to Shadow Slave which has one of the best world background/building in fiction. All in all, this book, no this MASTERPIECE is DEFINITELY worth reading.
I'll just shamelessly leave a review and say that I love you all, I'd love for you guys to kindly help correct my mistakes or typos. And leave a comment for the Chapter or something or Drop a review.
I'm not likely able to keep reading, not because the story, writing, etc is bad but because it literally left me in tears. I read to try to escape from so much pain and darkness in reality. I've enjoyed other stories from this author as the author does an amazing job of world building and character development, but they're hard to read since I'm far more emotionally invested.
Hey guys, it's a shameless author here!It's like a tradition to review your own book, so I won't deprive myself of it.My book is about a young adult, being summoned into a world of swords and magic, where there are so many dangerous creatures that he decides to become stronger to survive.I invite you to live with a real adventure with Cliff our protagonist.Your support will be welcome!!
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