As a Pole, it's hard for me to read this novel ... the author knows too little about the history of his country, the characters are annoying and stupid ... and many other irritating things. If someone has a lot of time can read, if someone expects a good story better to look for another novel.
Ayo i put this in my library not knowing that the book is written by an author i like, So Shame less 5 star review because i know the promise if a unique story is legit whatever dont at me okay, So give this and primordial dimensions a shot because they will not disappoint and fact when ill bE starting this in my down time from work and school! Happy reading yall
If theres one thing this author does right its building up a rhetoric with the characters, you actually care and enjoy reading about all of them and their conversations with the MC.The downside to this is the author sometimes drags on arcs or plot points for far too long, at least in most readers opinions and from my personal viewpoint. The author seriously drags on the MCs torture/mansion for quite a few chapters, but in exchange it awards us with the feelings of actually caring about the dynamics with Juno, Dinah, Anna, and others. For example we understand why Juno and the MC hate each other to their cores, and the narrative does a very good job reminding us, without being obnoxious. TLDR I would say this story is very mediocre, the one redeeming feature is the character dynamics and development. I hope Author finishes this story without a rushed ending and goes on to make an even better one.**. this story might be harem however every girl except one (stephanie) hates the MC so I cant actually say its harem, at least not for the first 200 chapters. There is quite a few women around the MC, and they might fall in love with him later in the story and/or gradually.
Hello! I am the author of this novel!I rated my novel based on my opinions and since I am a newbie at being a writer, my grammar is going to be messy so just comment about the wrong grammar on the paragraphs or something like suggestions.The story development is kind of fast but there is always an event that will occur in the future.As for the character design, I think I did a good job too since I planned this thing a very long time ago. Like the MC's messy personality.As for the updates, I can notify you if I can't update for a day or two. But it is somehow... rare.The schedules are always one chapter per day at 00:00 or midnight.Lastly, for the world background. I feel like I am interested in it, too.
I have read the RAWs a couple months ago up to chapter 132. Author wrote in his reader notes that this novel was supposed to have a System, but he scrapped it and had to rewrite what he planned to write. Reason? He said something like ,,I know there are not many exciting moments, but I have ambitions in my little heart. With a System, everything would be too easy to solve, no tension, no suspension, no ability, just ask system and done. If you don't like it, then so be it, I am writing it for myself, as for those who continue to support, thank you".He made the MC imagine himself to be as those in the books with system, but due to lack of cheat he started to write status bars, numbers and so on on normal paper. MC said it will help remember things more easily when he thinks it's his system :DI stopped reading despite the novel being super good and author's personality as above. Why? Reason 1: A few years of timeskip (the type i don't like, because i don't know what happened during that time and he has children already, the time skip was done to make it more realistic: it's a long term family buildup novel so they can't really battle all the time or face crises hence why skip as he for some reason didn't want to write about peaceful days). Reason 2: A wife with secrets and too strong of a personality.. With these two things, the novel's model that focused on family rather than MC lost its charm for me. Sects didn't play any active role up to chapter 132, only mentioned, e.g. that some promising children have to be sent to make name for themselves or obtain outside resources while the rest it's best to cultivate by family for family. Maybe i'll pick the novel up someday but the timeskip+wife combo really put me off especially when it was MTL. Either way, do check it out, this is the best novel in this genre, the other ones like Ancestor Above are too bland, illogical etc. There's only Great Tang Idyll that could perhaps compare, but is still probably not as good, but it's quite different as it has 2 MCs as a core while this one has family as a core.
hareem or no? please say noo but if it is i hope it is NOT one of those storys where the mc is going to fall in love with every pretty girl or he will forgive girls just because they are pretty god please no last Q is he cold and willing to do whatever it takes to get stronger or he's the i will sacrifice my life for you type?
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