It’s an interesting concept however the MC gets annoying at times. Moments where all he had to do was speak up to clear a misunderstanding he didn’t, I don’t know if it was an attempt at humour but it gets tiring after the first. Also similar to what another reviewer said, forge apprentices are basically slaves but for some reason because of the MC they allow them to compete with other nations for important territory changing decisions (up to ch 122 so far). Like… what?
Writing a review because the great plot deserves an official review (with mine just 1 to go)I can't say it's novelty as it is the result of stitching various plots already known, but the end result is great.The story per se is good.The writing quality could definitely be better, but bearable (definitely not like some mtl) (I also think it improved?!).
Great Storyline, Great Characters! Everything here is interesting and keeping me entertained. Worth of my time I say!Yes, I'm giving the author 5 stars! No, if possible I will give the author P.E.R.F.E.C.T. 100% 🧨🧨
It's a Sci-fi Novel guys, I'm a huge fan of sci-fi and the way this guy portrait his story it's actually not really bad, the detailed background and characters make this novep pretty lit. I recommend you this one👌👌👌
Although its a little early to review a story but still wanted to do it because I found it a little bit interesting...Most of the people saying it wasn't there type of book at first but l found it pretty interesting and cool...The story development and world background is quite nice and decent...All the best author... Hope u will finish writing this awesome story...
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