Reborn as Powerful Minister's Beloved

when should we be expecting update. at least let us know when and at what interval should we be expecting an update. this book is great reading

There are quite a few issues with this story. First and foremost is how absolutely slowly it moves. By chapter 20, the story has barely even begun, and it took about 11 chapters to reach what should have essentially been the first. This feels like a result of you going into extreme detail about backstory and world building before even giving the reader a chance to care about your characters. These are things that should have been introduced gradually, and less forcefully, as the story progressed, not all at once at the beginning.You also have a tendency to over explain things a lot. This not only takes up 200+% more words than you need to, it gets very tiring to read.The grammar is okay, but not great. You use "!!!!" and "???" and chatroom-like syntax, and it makes your story come off as if written by an overly excited teenage girl (which may be the case, I don't know).Your dialogue tends to be heavy eye-roll material as you often use it for exposition, making your characters come off as robotic and unrealistic. Backstory should not be forced into dialogue. It kills a story. And you've done that /a lot/ in yours, and right from the start as well.You've got a few interesting ideas and some potential, but the way you write seriously needs an overhaul. Spend a little time reading better written works, see how they do things and try to reach where you are at Ch20 in 2-4 chapters instead.Good luck.

this novel is different and interestingand I hope that this novel will be interesting in future days too. 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂☺️☺️

And here I thought this is something good without a system but not the description of course has a System.So this Is just a System Novel.WHY THE F.....K NAME OT LIKE THIS THEN IF THIS IS A SYSTEM NOVELTHE MANUAL PART WOULD BE SYSTEM

After marathon reading this, i can only say "WTF is this. This is soooo gooooodddddd"Reason? 1. MC is Smart and Witty2. Mc identity make us expect a good and complex plot (a beggar, an illegitimate prince, and a mystic. Mystic is someone that people regard as calamity)3. He solved problem with his brain, and this is not just face slapping among young master. And his brain isn't made of d1ck. Not harem seeking transmigrator 4. Author give us a really solid background story, so we can expect a really good story development and world background5. This story is heavy at first, but slowly become more mild. Some comedic undertone, and some mystery is a good spice to make the story more engagingAt first, i only voted this because other novel in what's next is too trashy. But now, after i tested it, i fall deeply in love with this novelI envy this novel future reader. The won't have to hang on the cliff with only around 30 chapter. They can have a feast and happily read this. Hahhh,,,

" As you know many of our brothers and sisters have been discriminated over the years and while kidnappings have been an occurrence, there's been a startling incline in the recent months. Most are quick to blame lawless bandits, but I think we're dealing with something greater."Adam turned around to face the world map."There have been several spots where Grimm have completely avoided trespassing, however all of our scouts that we've sent haven't returned. I'm convinced that you realize how troublesome that is."

It has pretty bad upload stability. The author said so himself. It has ok writing. Its interesting. I like it. The mc is kinda bland. Maybe because of how long it's been since I read the book. Until he uploaded a few chapters, I didn't read about mc for a while. Overall, pretty good.

So yung ist bf ko, transferee ako sa new school, 3rd year ako, tapos binubully ako ng tropa nya kasi kaaway ko dati yung isa dun sa dating school(wahahhaah) so itago natin sya sa name na J.J (ahhahahaha parang alam na niya to) so anyway, sa lahat ng manliligaw ko (wow byutipul) sya lang nagustuhan ko, ewan ko kasi dati ang standard ko ito: