Reborn As The Twin Sister of The Scum Harem MC

This is  a good story, but please update the previous chapters it's really sad that qidian has started it from chapter 138 😒                                      .

The vocabulary and grammar is worse than a primary schoolers, the synopsis alone has more than 30 grammatical errors.. how is it possible to read this..

great book from what I've read so far. I can't wait till I can read more of the book and hopefully there will be much more as time goes on.

I don't understand the point of making him a transmigrated hero, who before transmitting fully had to spend hundreds of thousands of years observing the world, if your going to make his past knowledge completely useless. He has proven to be unreliable and useless when it came to any type of information throughout the entirety of the chapters I read.The main character, having past acclamations as being a world observing hundreds of thousands year old entity, as well as an accomplished hero, is written in a way that makes him feel ordinary and not special in any regards. The story is written in such a way that it brings no emotions from the reader. I can't exactly pin point the exact reasons why, but I have managed to get a basic generalization an this is. First, the bland descriptions of actions,places, and things. Serves to make the story take a very one note plot.Secondly, the lack of character descriptions when it comes to the characters emotions and actions makes the story even more monotonous. Couple this reason with the first then you've got a very bland story that doesn't manifest any good emotions when reading it. Oh and I read the first 60 chapters not just 15 like it says.

The story is interesting and has good potential at the beginning.The idea of bringing the farm into another world system is really good.But I'm already coming to a major problem, it's unreadable (there's a wall of text in the chapters, no capitalization for the beginning of some sentences, punctuation is sometimes non-existent, chapter names sometimes mean nothing).Now concerning the story itself it started slowly and only became really interesting after about 20 chapters, which is regrettable, but it is better to build a story with a good basis.Some things about the story are not bad, but what bothers me is the Mc who is quite stupid, clear and simple, he has so many resources but doesn't even use a fraction of them and is too lazy to train even when he can make his shadows train for him, he still doesn't take it seriously and gets beaten by beginners who are even later, he decimates more than 60 dead eaters and kills them all and that's before he gets a good training and now in the 2nd world, he chose the twilight and honestly; it's probably the worst decision the author could have made, he's flinching at all the vampire eyes, which is a serious problem for a world that's not one of the most gory and terrifying.Overall, an average novel that needs a publisher quickly, but I think it has good potential, the author is also very active with more than 60 chapters in 4 days.Ps: I read the synopsis well so I know the author is a beginner and this novel is a bit of a draft but to improve it, you have to give constructive criticism.

Lillian stared at Marcus, his reaction and attitude was obviously a lot more of jealousy than curiousity. "Mother Tang called to informed that Ruby is getting married to Lucas soon, by next year. Both parents have agreed to it. And both side are starting with the necessary wedding arrangements." Lillian replied. Marcus stayed stunned and silence.

"Hmm…"

"the principal instruction was to do this in 6days after we continue to our next agenda" Ryu said