Rebirth into a Magical World

If we have to pay, needs to be edited. Badly. Flow is terrible and so many errors. The storyline seems inter though

Albusflores didn't exactly like himself being called 'newb', but he could tell that the previous kick had been a punishment for something. It wasn't like military lacked people like the girl in front of him - speaking with her fists first, then explaining later. Admiral had been like that as well.