Rebirth : Naruto's World [SYSTEM]

long time no update..is this book abandon??

Just awful.  It started as you would expect a novel with this title to, but not only are the 10 days incredibly drawn out with chapter 25 being early day 4 but the MC has already become a twisted narcissistic delusional arrogant psychopath by then.  Who knows how much worse he'll become in the following 6 days? He's already provoking people and then holding grudges against them when they respond in the simulations.

What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out. What? There's Yaoi tags? Fuck this **** I'm out.

Everything is good but story is very slow paced . starting was amazing snd by far one of my top story development but it is very slow !!,!Pls author fast pace the novel for revenge .

"This is a very nice one. The horror elements are on point in my opinion. I read it at night alone and I didn't dare go to the bathroom for another hour or two before I couldn't hold it in.""It gets me shiveri-" (𝘧𝘢𝘪𝘯𝘵 𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘤𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘴𝘰𝘶𝘯𝘥𝘴)". . .wait what was that? " (𝘴𝘭𝘪𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘦)"Ah, I'm just hearing things. Scared me fo-" (𝘵𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘱 𝘵𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘱)". . . Who's there!? "(𝘛𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘱 𝘛𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘱 𝘛𝘩𝘶𝘮𝘱)'𝘖𝘩 𝘯𝘰 𝘰𝘩 𝘯𝘰, 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘪𝘯𝘨! 𝘐𝘛'𝘚 𝘊𝘖𝘔𝘐𝘕𝘎!𝘊𝘢𝘭𝘭 911 𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘭 911 . . . 𝘯𝘰 𝘯𝘰 𝘯𝘰 𝘐 𝘯𝘦𝘦𝘥 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘸𝘢𝘬𝘦𝘯 𝘮𝘺 𝘯𝘦𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘣𝘰𝘳𝘴 𝘵𝘰𝘰'"HELP ME! HELP ME! PLEASE-SOMEONE"(𝘛𝘏𝘜𝘔𝘗 𝘛𝘏𝘜𝘔𝘗 𝘛𝘏𝘜𝘐𝘔𝘗 𝘛𝘏𝘜𝘔𝘗 𝘛𝘏𝘜𝘐𝘔𝘗)'𝘊𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘯 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘰𝘯, 𝘱𝘪𝘤𝘬 𝘶𝘱 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘢𝘭𝘭, 𝘱𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘦 𝘱𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘦' - "𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘦𝘴𝘴𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘤𝘰𝘶𝘭𝘥 𝘯𝘰𝘵 𝘣𝘦 𝘥𝘦𝘭𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘳𝘦𝘥 𝘥𝘶𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘢 𝘵𝘦𝘮𝘱𝘰𝘳𝘢𝘳𝘺 𝘯𝘦𝘵𝘸𝘰𝘳𝘬 𝘦𝘳𝘳𝘰𝘳. 𝘗𝘭𝘦𝘢𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘺 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘭𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳""I'm dead, I'm dead, I can't contact anyone"(𝘴𝘪𝘨𝘩)"Wait . . .the thumping is gone, I'm saf-" '𝘖𝘩 𝘯𝘰'. . .𝘚𝘪𝘭𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘦

After reading this novel, strangely I felt like I wanted to be sent in a world were I'll be fore to work hard to try and survive. So, that my slothful nature would vanished for my greater good.

First of all I really love the synopsis, I really do since every time I would read a story I always look at the synopsis since I believe that the synopsis defines the inside of my book and you will know if it will be pretty interesting or nah. So kudos to you for making an interesting synopsis. Next, the title chapters are pretty interesting too, makes you excited to read the next ones.  The flow of your story is great, the world building is pretty interesting and amazing. Keep writing!

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