The novel is one of the best novel i ve read everything is great but development of his relationship is very fast 8t semms like he is forgetting about his previous wife and focusing only on his new wife . Some time author should focus on them also
if you newer reader maybe its fine but for veteran this novel is full cliché and bullsh&$*. the concept system maybe quite refreshing for beginning chap but later become too boring. full plot armor and dumb mc making this perfect just to waste time
Author is racist, in the second and third chapter there were some thugs who 'happened' to all be black. When Ron (the MC) confronts them, he calls them "Slaves
Great book but small question. I've just passed ch 50 and it was said before that he could fight six major realms ahead. yet he struggles to kill people who can only fight 6-8 minor levels. how so?
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very nice, everything is fine just needs more chapters!!very nice, everything is fine just needs more chapters!!very nice, everything is fine just needs more chapters!!very nice, everything is fine just needs more chapters!!very nice, everything is fine just needs more chapters!!
"Ha! The donkey you're talking about must've been your mother!" He countered, preparing himself for a drawn out round of insults. While he was stockpiling possible comebacks in his head, Loki walked out of the other room. His presence disrupted the flow of the conversation between Rykar and Chance as they reluctantly fell silent while still glaring at each other.
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