Kinda weird to review your own since I'll definitely be biased towards it but anyway! This is my first work that I've published and I'll continue on publishing chapters daily and hopefully accomplish the dream to land a contract with Webnovel. This is a great story to read to pass the time and I hope you add this to your library.A few bits written there is actually from my real experience with handling guns, close-combat fighting, farming, etc. I just enhanced it a bit to... well you know the reason why(I suck at it irl). XDBy the way, please drop a review so I could learn what you think and I appreciate you all for taking the time reading something from a complete beginner. Thanks!
a novel where above 15chapter is a new world introduce every chapter though the world is 1 chapter only and it is rush introducing the plot from the movie or books then change only a few things inserting mc presence in the plot and ordering people taking leadership role of the heroes and world making sure mc doing something on the chapter so the chapter can be send out some of the female characters quickly fell in love with mc by meeting him half a day maybe less and over all it is an ok novel if you want a super fast pace novel
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Wonderful is good novel nice one good story good experience good character good design good background good story development good writing quality world background good overall nice good work
It's really good, definitely recommend.The story about demon girl who's actually has a real "sense" about her own kind, descending into a mortal realm just to find normality of daily life her own kind cannot afford. I see a lot of potential in this story, especially that naive demon girl.Overall, the narration is very vivid yet complex, easy yet interesting to understand if you have very good imagination since there are many implied messages and foreshadowing future which is very nice, especially in monologues, and environment descriptions.In conclusionTen out of ten
I don't understand the 5 star review bots. There is no reason in anything. It's just a continuous "and then, and then,and then..." Author probably doesn't know how to express a 'thought' or else every action wouldn't be labeled with "that seemed appropriate."
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