Ronnok finished his drink and fixed his tunic. He then reached for dewdrop all while thinking of where to bring her. Dewdrop curled up on the table knocked out turning over accidently knocking her mushroom top at ronnok's feet. Her once long braided hair now cut in uneven layers no longer baring the beauty she once had. Her short hair revealing a scar from a *rakvack* bite on her neck. Her mushroom top empty unlike before.
Love how the pace is going 💕 Ibrahim does have his own charm with how overbearing he sounds, but i just hope that he wouldn't hurt the fl with his obsessive love... Forced love isn't sweet after all.... Hehe, what stood out to me about this story is actually the author's beautiful writing. Very descriptive writing that involves the five sense, well, maybe, a little decrease in that will be better as I noticed that author describes alot. Overall, it's a good read 👌
Hey y'all! A noobie author here. Hope you guys give the novel a try and any criticism would immensely help as I move forward. The pacing in the first few chaps is a bit slow but I will try to make the work as enjoyable as possible.Thank you for your time and Ill keep y'all posted, Byeeee
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