Re: Zero - Bound by Fate: Subaru's Journey in Teyvat

it's good story, writing got better every update and stable chapter every week, appreciate bro

Unable to open his mouth he looked for ways to resist. But Yu Long stopped that rebellious tail at once. The beast was slowly dragged into the water.

But the person sitting on the throne was not affected by this. He simply mumbled, "Here he comes." Wei Zadong looked at the emperor only to notice his lips curved into a smile. He looked back at the display only to be awed again.

Lying Lvl 14

"Ah, ah. You'll ruin my lipstick," I remarked.

"Wait." I moved with confidence towards the stone outcropping, and with slow deliberation, felt the outlines of its shape with my fingertips, as if it were my star-crossed lover. "I think it's fine. I don't sense any traps."

"Take Ivan out of the forest while I hold this creature off," Harold said loudly while holding off the continuous assault of the creature's tentacle with a shield he cast earlier.

"what about you readers:what's the best thing you have on the planet earth"?.

"So this is the dimensional gap" Bikou commented as he took a look around nothing but a myriad of  colors and darkness

"Wow, it looks pretty, say father can we harvest it?" Wei ask his father while walking towards it.

Tong Rong: 'hmm' when is it? I have to go  and show my since we also did some of our  business together.

Very good, i love the story and the plot, it has great exposure to words overall and its detail to characters and the setting is played very nicely, well done!