Seeing that they did not intentionally courted death, Allen continued to swept peacefully without making any noise. He saw the bunch of bastards that he floored being carried towards another place. He sighed as he continued to look at the sky with a lonely expression.
Ping pats on Wang Jiu's arm affectionately and turn to look down at her other lover in her arms, "Baby, my pretty baby, are you tired? wanna sleep now?" she coos and speaks in a soothing voice to Nana who was almost falling asleep in her arms.
So much potential, and the spice is absolutely delicious! I love the intense heat between Antonio and Dahlia. I'm also really excited to see how their characters develop and uncover what led to the events of Chapter 1. Can't wait for more!
Absolute dog shite of a novel story line makes no sense absolute gibberish writing with no consistency in the plot feels as though I'm reading about someone's imaginary thoughts skipping the details and instead bulletpointing the events makes no sense and glad that this gotshite novel is free still feel scammed by the time I wasted reading this but atleast I didn't waste any money on it
Good story and rich world building for now but it's too fastpace with no indebt immersion with the world and it's character. In my opinion a more slow to meduim pace should have been implemented
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