Psychic Tattoo

This is an excellent book. Dramas don't drag our too long. it's funny and very entertaining.  Can't wait for Molly & Sean's wedding. Love this story.

Dropped hardPositive: Translated very well. Just minor grammar mistakes- Background/secondary characters are more relatable then the MC (except the usual Novel 'enemies' who's IQ dropped like a rock)- 'Pokemon' fight scene is nicely written- The story has a nice flow and you can really understand and follow the story... ish. Has a nice idea but horrible execution. Explanation and reasoning bellow. ________________Negative: MC and the system and authors brain- MC in the beginning still behaves like a normal person who was transported to a new world. Good reasoning to try and repair relationship with sibling cause original Persona of the body was a dick.Suddenly System appears and story goes stupid.- Mix Pavlov + Stockholm Syndrome + Dumb author ideas/interpretation of a relationship.- system threatens MC with punishment if MC can't accomplish Quest/Mission. These with literal Torture (lighting that was triggered) or promise of Oblivion (erase Memories and deletions)- MC, under pressure, must train a rat where they both can die infinately but both experience how they died.MC trains rat among super monsters that the rat constantly dies. And when rat feels tired after fighting and beating a monster, MC kills rat to safe time cause when rat is reborn it's fully energetic again.- afterwards owner of rat comes to collect the rat and suddenly MC is totally emotionally attached to rat and gets angry/jealous why rat jumps for joy to the nonviolent pet owner.Story has nothing to do with Pet Store after a while. It's all about the food and training pet for others. Nothing about being a pet shop owner and it's development. Personal not sure if Author even knows what it's like have a pet.

author great job. keep doing it man. keep postingas for future readers please don't drop this after reading d title or d first 3-4 chapters cuz those r generic -- author does his unique magic only after that -- so atleast read it till ch 15 before dropping it(that is if u can - after reading till then🤣🤣🤣)

I like the master and disciple theme, but this novel could ruin it, the MC only accepts female disciples and that's not the problem, but it seems that they have all been brainwashed into wanting to just lick the MC ignoring their personalities and just making the reason for their existence to lick the MC, seriously it seems like it was actually written by a person who has never had a loving relationship in his life.about the world of romance: generic no salt, ridiculous advances, and a lot of slap in the face the secondary characters: I skipped the interactions for my mental healthfinally, read it at your own risk.(my English is my second language, don't notice if it seems a bit "abnormal")

Good so far..More chaps when???stupid character limit.AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

Shynobi here... I'll be shameless to give myself a vote. This is another concept novel that I will update 1 chapter a day. If many likes it and it reaches enough reader traction, I will take out the draft I have for it and continue writing. Thanks to all those who take their time to read my novels... Love you guys!

'A Lamborghini. The owner must be really rich.'

"Well-"