if the roles were reversed this novel would have never gone out.The mc is a beta who got raped by some cultivator who used some forbidden technique to forcefully take away his yang energy which wuold have normally crippled him (it won't matter since it says he has a system) then gone away and came later (after 4 years) because she got pregnant (4 daughters), all of this while talking to him like he is trash.Now he takes all this as if nothing and is fine with it. All in all a beta.P.S. before she cripples him he saved her life
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This is a review of the first chapter. The main character is Li Yu who was orphaned at age 11. To avoid going into the army Li Yu has been working as a hunter to feed and shelter himself and his younger brother. The world he lives in has both mortals and immortal cultivators. During one hunting trip, he finds a gem inside his prey. Soon after a mysterious voice keeps asking him to join a cultivation chat group. The story is written with a sense of humor.
i loved this story BUT then i hated this story why??Pros -the story has a Unique power system ,weapons and system. Mc has unique character and side characters were also decent. it was fun so much so that i was thinking why isn't it in the top 10 ratings?it was untill i reached chapter 220 and his family arc begins.Cons-1) story took a massive nose dive in writing quality , i genuinely felt like author of the story changed .2)Sooo many cringey moments . like everyone treating him like god . when he's just e-f rank. doesn't matter if he's strong for normal e-f rank but still, treating him like a god ? really???3) it took 40-60 chapters for his backstory to be revealed and for whole family arc . 30-40 chapters just standing in a single place just revealing who he is.4) BIGGEST PROBLEM was that author scrapped everything he did in first 220 chapters like- changed system ,removed skills, destroyed his items and his dimensional storage , destroyed inheritence items , etc so many things he acquired in 200chapters gone just like that. then what was the point of first 200 chapters?5) chapters became shorter with each day ..in conclusion :first 200 chapters God tier. Next 130 chapter trash tier.
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