Pins or Die!

Writing review as of chapter 462. Decent novel better than the majority in this app but plagued with pacing issues. Story premise is interesting with higher dimensions and historical rifts. However, dimensions basically just become power levels and not much variety with rifts(would explain but don’t want to give spoilers). Author sets up for large character development by making the MC infuriatingly naive. Love story just feels forced so isn’t impactful but more like filler. Pacing becomes an issue with explanations taking majority of a chapter often with rhetorical questions that could be answered within actual story elements allowing reader to make conclusions instead of treating them like children who need everything explained. Action is good and character development is well done but as stated before character starts almost drop worthy. Will continue to read

I have read some reviews from other readers and noticed everyone is focusing on how fast the story is going, in my opinion this speed of the story is perfect for what the author is trying to convey. If I get the story right, the Mc road to cultivation and increasing his power is all for the sake of his family and forming a sect unlike other ml who only work on their progress to become the most powerful cultivator in the world. So with those kind of Ml I can see the story showing us how the ml develop his strength and all the face slapping the goes with it, however our ml’s main focus is to make connections while increasing his strength which means less face slapping and more hand shaking 😏There for please give the story another chance while trying your best not compare this story with other reincarnation novels

Very confusing, very confusing. A simp or not?I hope to know what this is about!!!

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great novel overall!personally I was able to enjoy it for its entirely for the past 3 days.it was great story development and explanation of powers.though I did see a large drop in story development at 295-304 it seems that the story was rushed to finish pretty fast and the ending left me unsatisfied.sucks but I loved it beforehand.

This is an interesting story.  It, however, is moved mostly like dialogue with little description in it.  Personally, I would like it described to me and not coming out and telling me directly.For example: In the first chapter, why do the maids think the young master is drunk?  Could it be the smell?  The author could elaborate on that and improve the story.I do hope that the author continues this.

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