Peritinere

As Bhumi kept her lips pursed and didn't say something, suddenly, Dev looked serious and concerned, and sat down opposite to her and asked her again. After much persuasion, Bhumi told Dev about the conversation she had overheard.  

The plot will unfold around them, getting close to them will save me the trouble of looking for powerful enemies.

This novel is interesting. The writing quality could improve but it doesn’t bother me too much. The story development hasn’t really gone anywhere as of yet but it’s only been six chapters. The character design is interesting, the world building isn’t different but that’s because it’s the real world. Overall this book has room for improvement and I’d suggest grammerly for little mistakes though it’s a very good read😊

I don't mind if this story doesn't hit it off. I'll write better ones in the future. However, I think it is worth reading for what I'm offering. I won't get a contract for this story, nor will I accept one in that case. It will be for anyone to read if they like how I write, or the kinds of stories I write. This is only the beginning. The Lord of Rot is a fantasy story set in a post apocalyptic future, where the main character has to survive whilst navigating through a complex world of monsters infected by a "rot" and a system of belief beneath the deities of this world. The story will continue to get more in depth, but it is an easy start. The writing is good - but maybe different to many other web novels. I don't thin the main character is a bad one, but he is our lens to the world, not anything else - - - as of yet. Please do read... (:

I came here to cry, and the tears we're delivered! Cant wait for more!!!

I have read all the books by Miss B, truly impressed by her writing skills,character development,values and take on society .Looking forward to how the plot unfolds here ,the twists and turns.Dawn smartness is what I look forward to as she is fighting with no support system.