Peace's Payback (hiatus)

  • Genre: Other
  • Author: Denisat
  • Translator:
  • Status: Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0)

Synopsis:

Poverty creates humility,Humility creates diligence,Diligence creates wealth,Wealth creates arrogance,Arrogance creates war,War creates poverty.

What is a lone fighter in this cycle? Nothing less than an insect.

What is a nation in this cycle? Nothing less than a colony.

These are only victims of time.

Yet a man finds himself, after a becoming a victim in his world, in an unknown world and tries to break this cycle.

He only gets Peace's Payback.

~formerly known as Si vi pacem para bellum

[Warning the RRL Editor messed some things up. I am trying to fix that.

In addition, there are frequent POV changes in the first chapters. However, first and third person POV become the norm after some chapters.

OP-Protagonist ahead]

Another more important warning:

However, be advised that I am not a native English speaker. Besides, I am not a professional author. I'm just your average German student with an average grade in English. That leads to the fact that this story has something of an attempt and a Draft.

Therefore, everything is subject to change, including the cover photo, title or even character names.

This may no longer be the case once I have a reasonable understanding of writing a novel. I have no great style; it is less than average at best. My characters are weird, yet I try to let them feel human. My grammar is at an average level for a student and not even mediocre for an author. I never wrote novels. I mostly wrote analyses and I am just using the experience I have gained there.

You're reading what comes off my keyboard as it's made, with limited editing. I do a spellcheck with Grammarly and some other software yet mistakes will still exist.

In addition, the RRL Editor messed a little bit up. Some paragraphs are at completely weird places or you can find some strange symbols &sas or something like that. I am currently trying to find a solution for that.

Important notice:

The novel is updated at least once a week and at least once a month if I can't follow my schedule. I'm just a student and really busy.

Disclaimer:

This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, businesses, places, events, and incidents are either the products of the author's imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.

The cover illustration was made with Paint.net, Microsoft Paint, Inkscape and postermywall.com

EDITING/PROOFREADING:

I did a rewrite and I don't know if there are some mistakes left, but I guess it should be okay now. At least I hope so ._.

If you want to become a proofreader and help me, feel free to PM me. However, I cannot give anything in return.

Explanation:

Rewrite means rewrite proofreading done

Rewrite NP means rewrite no proofreading done, high chance of mistakes

Check Ongoing = This poor me reads that chapter and searches for some issues with the Editor. Also, adds some stuff. -> I would appreciate if you rate that in separate parts. Prologue until the chapter before the check + chapter with check + last one.

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  1. Nima0S0
    Nima0S0 rated it
    I'm at chap 365 now.At first the story is good and characters is good but..... what a pity MC turn into a idiot from 300+ chap. It seems he never learn from his earlier mistakes.Like that elder from megrez peak (i think his name zhao lin), like when he and li fei searching shangguan yan and almost killed by old fogy just because an a stupid reason, like when he not kill a bad guy in the forest seven sword sect which make his 2 friends one died and the other is losing the leg.... etc etc etc so many stupid thing he did which make his or his friend almost die. He had 3 memories of live but except for cultivation technique and recognize for several things the rest is useless. he only uses knowledge but not experience
  1. premkumarkale
    premkumarkale rated it
    Unfortunately, missing the author’s point, or not understanding the book, is not enough to prevent one from reviewing and/or rating it. Read to understand and grasp from the writers reality then visualize in your mind ,this novel has all qualities.
  1. FaithAlbert7019
    FaithAlbert7019 rated it
    anyone can you please share the raw title if any?????? anyhow love the story so far and looking forward to reading more ir just webnovel please just select this boookkk
  1. PurpleGenius0Ct
    PurpleGenius0Ct rated it
    The story development is unique among all xianxia types I have read. These first chapters really piqued my curiosity,for example the main character seems reincarnated but it is only hinted,the author doesn't go at all into lengthy explanations how the mc only naturally could overcome this or that problem due to his past life or anything similar. The translation is also excellent but I have to add that personally as a Chinese language learner I would like an explanation of certain idioms or language intricacies. The characters are interesting full of common moral flaws that makes them more refreshing and easy to identify with.I have to point out that the main character seems a bit wise beyond his age,but that could be explained later on. The world has not been unveiled as of yet so I can't really judge it,the interrelation between different social statuses is as expected in a feudal way of governing. All in all I think it is an excellent read and I recommend it to all but younger audience.I especially appreciate the humor and feel it adds a lot to the enjoyment of the read but the jokes and perspective offered can be understood by more mature audience.
  1. Haizao
    Haizao rated it
    I kinda like the first chapters but then the authors just keep on spouting so much bl. Too much repetition on how imortant is this, how important is that, how good is this, how rare is that, etc. I just cant take that much info for a few equip that he will probably change after he level up. The story development is just too slow that at chapter 39, not even an hour passed in the game. Just how slow is this s#*t! Well that's it, too bad I wont be paying coins for 40 chaps and above as they are just like filler chapters.
  1. minatoflashsBX
    minatoflashsBX rated it
    I will say the moment that the main protagonist started to reject equality was the moment I got interested in this story. Also if it helps, try to read your work to someone or say it outloud to yourself because there a few grammar mistakes. The mistakes do not effect the overall rating of the book for me. Thus I hope you update this novel and The mysterious black magician novel too because thos will be great to read more often. Thank you for writing these novels.
  1. AceStudio
    AceStudio rated it
    I will give this book a chance because it seems cool but the fact that you stated there will be multiple protagonists is a huge turn off, so if do have multiple protagonists, don't **** it up
  1. TrueMonarch00j8S
    TrueMonarch00j8S rated it
    Good novel....a hidden gem....but it seems dropped.... blablabblablab blablabblablab bla bla blablabblablab blablabblablab bla blablabblablab bla bla bla blablabblablab bla bla blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab blablabblablab

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