Jeez... I don't know what to say. The MC is literally stupid and it's hard to accept him. His thinking is also stupid... Here's the thing that caused me to drop it: the MC thinks that 'the best things should be reserved for the elders'. Literally no ambition at all! There is an elder that makes things hard for him by not giving him enough time in the study pavilion of sorts and the MC does nothing in return, just accepts that treatment, even tries to give him his most prized possession! Also, I don't know if it's planned or is it just that author comes up with things as he writes, but the MC never gets enough information and this leads to stupid situations! Also, there are too many carrots. Not everyone likes carrots.
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Just completed reading this novel and thought I might leave a review. At first glance, it seems like a normal op system urban novel where the mc gets overpowered quickly, but it isn’t. The system acts more of a guide or coach, granting certain powers but nowhere near as overpowered as in other novels. Kind of an interesting take in the genre which I appreciated. About the characters, I found them to be more 3D, fleshed out and real than I expected which was refreshingly nice. The MC is rational, knows his limits and isn’t trying to be a savior in every situation. I liked the interactions between the characters as it generally didn’t feel forced. Regarding the plot and the world background, I thought it could use a little more work. The time skips sometimes were pretty abrupt and I got confused what was happening sometimes. Same thing with world background: it is developed to an extent, but I feel like there were missing pieces by the novel was finished. On that note, the ending was somewhat abrupt and felt like a lot wasn’t resolved. Overall, the readability (grammar, punctuation,etc) was pretty good. There’s definitely potential in this novel and although I do think there’s room to improve, I did enjoy reading it. My favorite interactions were between mc and fl. Looking forward to more novels!
Master of White Land and Mahesa Wulung, together blow their flutes while Gangsiran is silently listening to the beat. At first, their rhythm was the same.
Alra went to his fluffy bed with many plans for next week and Zan went to bed feeling satisfied that he got to spend time with Alra. Ever since he remembered, Alra was like a little brother he loved to dote on and he was officially accepted as one after all these years. New year seemed to have started fine for the Bilen family.
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