I can only give this a solid 5/5 for a few reasons: The story itself is great. Well written chapters, vivid desciptions, and great world building. But one thing that is a big letdown is pacing. The chapters are too long, and the author tends to over explain. It's not a bad thing. It's great, but it does not work on this platform. Yet I hope this story goes far! I'm excited to read this to the end!
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