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Just a small suggestion you are leaving chapters without finishing it the princess request second chapter ends before he tells his decision and the alchemy deal also ends before they discussed the deal. It seems like an incomplete ending.

Not bad could use some polishing in some places(i.e storyline explanation and basic background details) ,and is an overall decent read so far.(tip: With my experiences in reading fanfics, assume the reader has little to no knowledge of the world and find ways to introduce them to the plots so that you can plan on how to properly introduce stuff.)(tip/advice: In a multiverse/Omniverse fanfic, a AU is your best friend.)

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