Overcomer!!

A little bit of mistakes here and there but not enough to mess with the flow of the story. So far the I like the pacing of the story the only thing I have a problem is if author just little more details of the mc strength like I feel like we don’ really know the strength the people he is fighting so I would just mention their cultivations strength in the future. Other then that everything seems really good can’ wait for more chapterst

I haven't read the whole novel but the first 6 chapters exposes the plot of the novel without it's being laggy, filled with love and strong emotions between two mates.Not gonna say much because I don't wanna be a spoiler.But I highly recommend