Outcast BTS Fanfic

I really want to like this novel, I really do. The author however spends a large chunk of chapters explaining things instead of letting the story play out so the chapter payoff feels much to be desired. While there are a ton of chapters the story takes forever to unravel.

Shameless author self review. Still learning how to write and I hope that as I slowly progress through the story that my writing should get better and better as I go.

I’m really hyped up for the journey Ling Feng is gonna embark in, lets hope he gets to level up even more and gets to understand the secrets of the world and dao better

harem dont waste your time...I had no problem with the overall development until this: "Enemy of women? I'm the savior of all men and beautiful women, the nightmare for all ugly freaks and transvestites. I'll make sure that they wouldn't dare to come out and scare others!" 🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮like, what the actual fuck bro, nah

A good bookGood storiesAnd I enjoy it very muchPeople should read itCuz this goodAnd suchAnd I really like short stories with a good action thingy than romance

An Amazing novel, returning back in time has always been one of my favourite tags and this novel perfectly shows that, I just hope that the author could write more words in his chapters. Overall I think the book has a lot of potential and I hope the author continues with it.

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The Story is Rushed,this is feel like some sort of Story Log.and motherfuc-ker Webnovel is reducing The chapter again.....😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬