Only Death Do Us Apart

There's no spoiler here.First, i've read the raw and kept up with the newest chapter in China, so I can honestly tell you my feelings about it. This novel is the best i've ever read on Qidian since the day my friend recommend the site(to help me learn Chinese). It's nothing similar to those trash out there which only include some boring stereotypes about the MC keeping "zhuangbi" and facesmacking. This novel really builds a world, you can easily see this, as you keep reading and moving forward with our MC, the world unfolding itself before your eyes. Steampunk, Cthulhu, Victorian era style, SCP...These tags are just tags, they can't describe the true spirit of the novel. The author creates this world based upon these ideas, but there's definitely not only these ideas. It has more. As to what it holds, it awaits you to find out.Due to this author's excellent character portrait, you as a reader will get a feeling as if these characters were real: they really live in that world. It's not fake; at least the author won't let you feel so. I found what I felt when I was still a boy reading the hobbit and the lord of ring. I mean I'm not comparing this novel to J.R.R.Tolkien's great masterpiece. It's just that me as a stupid reader who didn't like reading before at all got this stupid feeling, never mind it if you don't like my words. I won't eat them anyway.

One of the most garbage novels ever. No world building, the fights scenes are awfull, author forgets alot of thing like his sister and beast etc. The cultivation system also doesnt make sense.

I Don’t have the word for discribe this novel i just love it......……..............................................................................................................................................................................

my head hurts its too fast ....................................................................................................................................

Honestly, the first 5 chapters had some mistakes but I persevere a little bit too since I'm interested in the plot. It was pretty obvious the author was a newbie in writing and always asked for help and advice. But as I read further, I can see his improvements. His writing style becomes more amazing and I got hooked on the story before I knew it. Continue the good author!!!

Blatant plagiarism, the original story was barely tolerable, but this is complete trash.

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one of my favorite novels on this  site................................................................................................................