One Piece: Invincible Starting From The Fruit Of Words

I must say that I've been waiting 3 full weeks before this book obtained enouth votes, si I am happy now. I'll go to the main points now, first on the wrighting qualty, wile I've been reading books in english for three years now, I can't say I'm proficient in ortograph so my point of view may not be of interest to you but so far, I didn't see notable mistakes.Second as the book just started being translated we can't be sure about the stability of updates but I'll just say that the 18th chapter was updated 20 hours ago while the 17th was 10 hours ago, not saying it is bad, but it may be bad.For the story developpement, it's fine, I mean, in other books the mc is like "I'm hearing voices and seeing floating textes, fine I'll follow their orders" while the corect thing to think is "am I crazy? Like, in my brain?" But some weirds happening, the sister of the unicorn man find the mc's house but I don't remember the mc telling them where he lives. But overall, it's okay.For the character desing, well the mc is the classical "I don't talk much and I'm cold headed and I'm beautifull" but you now what, I don't hate what is classical! but he is a bit lucky, beeing choosen out of a full room of doctors and interns to help,while he was playing on is phone, I'm okay withe the fact that a girl will mostly go to a charming guy, but when it comes to work, you won't takes the risk to bring someone who is playing on his phone at work to help just because he is dashing, your putting yourself in danger of being fired.For the world backgroud I don't know, it seems futuristic with the transformers (I don't now about others countrys but in france transformers are a bunch of giant robots who can transform in vehicles) but my lack of medical knowledge stop me from judging anithing about the hospital.All in all, It's very good for now, and I'm waiting to see what's next! (I hope the 19th chapter will be out before the 20th)

I expected much from this novel. Way too much.Although confusing during the first few chapters, it evolved wonderfully.The story line is pretty good with some decent twist and turns to keep you hooked. Until random powerful characters shows up out of nowhere to mess up what could have been a good climax. Once was tolerable, but this keeps happening now. It's like the author doesn't want anyone to die.What happens when you've read over two hundred fifty chapters and none of the major enemies (There's a LOT of them) don't die at all because they all of a sudden gets saved by stupidly random events. It gets boring quckly.Sigh. For the purpose of word count, the author decides to mess it all up. I hope it gets better. But for now, this is so anticlimactic.The current arc is so disappointing.

Idk why people are shitting on the novel. It's decent; the MC may be a tad lacking in machismo manner, but the whole premise is him getting rewarded by pampering his alcoholic master. He isn't being hurt, nor degraded, so I wouldn't tag the MC as a masochist. It's decent, and I'd like to see it pass.

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「Please oh esteemed goddess, please help me!!!」

"I've been to Trinst before. So, did your master free you, child?"

"I'm just joking," She giggled, calming the atmosphere. "I'm your world's Goddess."

Back on the ground, Hinata sensed something and looked at the roof where the strange people stood, however, what he saw was just an empty rooftop