Not your standard fantasy harem magic novel

The storytelling is very amateurish, there's some blatant fan service and casual sexism, but at least the MC is smart and the system mechanics are interesting.Reading up to chapter 36, I find the MC's rational decision making very refreshing. The game mechanic (where leveling up with soul energy sometimes rewards you with an item instead if there's excess) is creative in its own way.However the storytelling itself is amateurish. Small fights that we know the MC or another character will win are described instead of cut, allowing the plot to progress faster. There's also a lot of repetitive descriptions of characters that should also be cut.Tropes: Ice queen tsundere, a lot of hot blooded men, and OP dark lord MC himself. No arrogant young masters (yet).Also, Lilith could totally be cut out of the beginning. She's only there for comedic relief, fanservice, and to inform the MC of "things he would figure out eventually."Lastly, there is definitely some casual sexism, culture shocks, that people might not like.

Great story well done keep it up ........

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Read up to 200 chaptersWriting Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking.Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner.Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future.Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters.World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on.Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.

A good novel with bad(in my perspective) update rate. Will be waiting for it to stack a bit. The author is putting a lot of effort. A slice of action coated with the comedy and fantasy in an otherworldly superhuman school life.

Well, i wish you dont drop it, event if this story is slow paced, keep working for it, i will support you, thanks for your hard work if you read this, please dont drop it

I love this kind of story so much. The ML has both brain and power, he always outsmarts some characters and fights well. It is so fun and worth reading. The lead always impresses me, he's so cool and funny at the same time. I may sound like a simp (lol) but he makes the overall of this novel perfect.

carl look up and said "me I'm simple trouble maker heavenly carl the king of heaven I hope you watch what will happened next 2 day " after that carl left