I liked all of IET novels but God, he's terrible at timeskips and he keeps getting worse. This latest one, Cosmic Professional Gladiator had so many timeskips and they're terrible. Even tho I liked the novel, it's almost like reading a summary and not a story.
I hated time skip that just goes '2 years went by' like, dude, how many paragraphs are there in a chapter? How many sentences? Break them down can't you. Use a sentence to describe the weeks, paragraph to describe the months. That would only take like 10% of the chapter length but it flows so much better.
Towards the upper middle part, it got so much worse, at one point I think there's a timeskips every 2 chapter and it went like the example above. Even after that, when getting into a new arc and he arrived at a brand new world and new power system and got so much to explore, it literally timeskips in the very next chapter he arrived, that part really p*ss*s me off and ruined the immersion
At some point does the protagonist stop accumulating villain points and simply start enjoying this new life and having a true romance with the heroines?
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I hated time skip that just goes '2 years went by' like, dude, how many paragraphs are there in a chapter? How many sentences? Break them down can't you. Use a sentence to describe the weeks, paragraph to describe the months. That would only take like 10% of the chapter length but it flows so much better.
Towards the upper middle part, it got so much worse, at one point I think there's a timeskips every 2 chapter and it went like the example above. Even after that, when getting into a new arc and he arrived at a brand new world and new power system and got so much to explore, it literally timeskips in the very next chapter he arrived, that part really p*ss*s me off and ruined the immersion