Naruto: The Chosen Undead

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It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in. Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this. The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others.He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago.He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store.It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.

Its a really cool novel. I enjoy the premise of mastering everything, so this was nice. It wasn't rushed and I enjoy the stage like system with the domains.

Why wasn't this novel picked up?  It's a breath of fresh air, and actually written very very nicely.  I highly recommend it if you like unique and solid world building and fun characters that are fleshed out.

Another story with an interesting premise but bad writing. The author doesn’t understand the concept of flow, so the writing is very choppy as a result. And the writing itself seems like it was probably written by a young teen. I would recommend passing on this one.

PLEASE MORE CHAPTERS HAVE MERCY ON MEE! I NEED THIS IN MY DAILY LIFEE!Author please, translator please, everybody pleaae I want 100 chapters tomorrow :( pleaseee!

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PENG!