NOIS: A RWBY fanfiction

Review as of chapter 630. Might include minor spoilers but I'll try to keep them to a minimum.Short Version: Stop scrolling through reviews and just go read the novel!Long Version: I'll start off by saying that this novel is simply amazing. Stories like this are what keeps me from just deleting the app due to the sheer number of unreadable nonsense it has. Now for an actual breakdown:Writing Quality - The quality is simply top-notch. No grammatical mistakes, clear and concise sentences that flow into each other beautifully, as well as smooth transitions between different points throughout the story. It's obvious that the author has improved in this regard by quite a bit, compared to his first novel (Lightning is the Only Way), which was already incredible by Webnovel standards.Story Development - The novel is slow-paced for the most part, and especially at the beginning, but I find that positive in this case, since we get a better look at the struggles Alex (later Shang) has to go through to adapt to a completely new reality where his life is constantly on the line. There are eventual time skips in the story, which are unavoidable simply due to the fact that you can't become a Sword God without hundreds (quite possibly thousands at this rate) years of training.Character Design - This is the biggest reason for this novel's success. Everyone, and I mean EVERYONE, is fleshed out in such detail that it wouldn't surprise me if the author one day revealed he has been studying the human mind for over 100 years. As for Shang himself, the many hardships he has gone through and the eventual revelation that he is, for reasons I obviously won't mention here, the enemy of the world (Opposer vibes 😉), have made him resolved to do whatever it takes to reach his goal. He will sacrifice anything and anyone for power.Updating Stability - Not much to say here. 2 chapters a day plus the fact that the author is an absolute legend. Broke both his arms at some point and somehow still pushed out chapters until he was eventually forced to take a small break.World Background - We get a basic understanding of how the world works and how the mages have complete rule over it early in the story and get more and more pieces of information in regards to the powers they wield, as well as the nature of the world itself, as the story progresses. Admittedly, there have been a few instances where the author goes into too much detail about something that isn't really relevant, but that isn't nearly enough to make the story less enjoyable, at least for me.Overall, this is truly an incredible story and I highly recommend it.Truly impressive work so far, Heat. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

i can only say that the translator doesn't deserve to work in this field. please just quit your work cause it will only harm the author and readers

Dear readers, Way of the Devil has been released up to more than 30 chapters!!Thank you all for your strong support! Though some may have felt that the novel has a slow start, those who have read till chapter 30 will quickly realise how well the first 30 chapters have set the stage and built up the suspense for the explosive action that's about to come! Lu Sheng's world is highly intriguing, dangerous, frightening and addictive. From here on, sparks will fly, mysteries will unravel and heads will roll!Currently, the release schedule for Way of the Devil is 1 chapter per day, every day except Tuesdays and Thursdays. There's also a Discord server specially created for all fans of Way of the Devil, where you can chat, air your views, ask questions & guess what's happening next! Kurisu and I will be there waiting for you! Here's the invite: https://discord.gg/qkFVEaPIf you like this novel, please post a positive review! That will increase its visibility so that more readers will learn about this epic novel and get to enjoy it, as we follow Lu Sheng's journey along the Way of the Devil!

Sorry my sister, but since the Empress of the Moon event started, I feel that you have spoiled a lot of things. I hope for success in the future. I will stop reading this novel.

Awesome story building and one of the best lemons I have read in a while keep it up and this will get big someday good luck 👍 .......... DON'T EVEN THINK OF DROPPING IT OR I WILL FIND WHERE U LIVE AND WE WILL HAVE A NICE "TALK" .....LOL

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So far from what I read, The plot point is quite interesting, it adds some mystery and good build-up on the happening especially with the main character Vicky.What I like about this novel it's bringing some kind of dark atmosphere especially with the beginning that is quite shocking. As for the main character, Vicky, I think she could be a really interesting female lead in WN which is a quiet hidden gem.For the con is mostly based on my opinion or taste which is there is one paragraph that literally likes a wall of text and I recommend to split up into two or three paragraphs, to make the reader more comfort to read.I think that's all I have to say and Thank you very much, Keep up the good work, and can't wait for other chapters to come.

I love what's happening with this novel It sorta gives off the Solo Leveling vibe in some small places but totally unique.World was built up greatly and everything was fleshed out wonderfully.Good work Author-San! XD